Hello, how are you? Thanks for stopping by again.
It is Tantalizing Tuesday, and as always I have a new pic and 200 words. This is the pic I have chosen for you this week:
This picture was taken from the following website:
https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=silhouette&bav=on.2,or.r_cp.r_qf.&bvm=bv.52434380,d.d2k,pv.xjs.s.en_US.RJfod4swqLE.O&biw=1024&bih=674&dpr=1&um=1&ie=UTF-8&hl=en&tbm=isch&source=og&sa=N&tab=wi&ei=949AUqvRFtGLhQeZg4CwCw#hl=en&q=couples&tbm=isch&um=1&facrc=_&imgdii=_&imgrc=7NVkFdkwYRUx5M%3A%3BL4mX5nfhJcPrTM%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Funiquenaturewallpapers.com%252Fwp-content%252Fuploads%252F2013%252F01%252Fromantic-couple-sunset-Wallpaper-HD.jpg%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Funiquenaturewallpapers.com%252Fromantic-couple-sunset-wallpaper-hd%252F%3B1920%3B1080
So here is my 202 words:
The sea was
calm and the air tranquil as the setting sun burnt its last rays onto the side
of my body. We sat on top of the water edge with the gentile lul of the sea
lapping seductively against the side of the rocks. We talked about everything.
The weather, his work, my work and he listened to every word I said, taking it
all in as if I was the most important person in the world. He made me laugh so
much my sides hurt. When he talked I found myself being pulled in and hanging
off every word he said.
‘Is this
what a true connection felt like?’
A Seagull
few into the sun’s light as we were momentarily plunged into darkness. ‘Was it
that late already?’
“I know, we’ve
only just met, but I’ve had the best night tonight.”
His honest
words cut deep, mirrored by my own feelings. I didn’t want to say good bye.
“Can I see
you again?”
Why I felt
like a school girl is beyond me, but his simple request made me smile so much
my cheeks felt the strain. I sat up and
moved closer to him.
“I’d like
that a lot”
Hope you liked this weeks tantaliser. I'll be back next week with another, but in the mean time, why don't you check out all the other authors participating.
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Until next week, take care.
J.P. Stevens
xXx
Lovely. The twilight hours, rhythmic surf, beating hearts, hot pulses and new beginnings.....I see the potential to go anywhere you want with this chance encounter. Loved it:) xo
ReplyDelete:-) Thank you Muff, glad you liked it. xx
Delete"A seagull few into the sun's..." It should be flew, a minor typo. This has the beginning of a much more detailed story. It would be nice to read the dialogue of the conversations they shared and how he made her laugh. Beautiful setting and theme.
ReplyDeleteYeah I have a little something mulling over, but I was limited to 200 words. :-( Thanks for the correction and for stopping by Pablo. xx
DeleteAww, such a lovely beginning for them :-)
ReplyDeleteUntil she finds out he is a serial womaniser.... :-) You heard it heard first. Thanks for stopping by Doris. xx
Deletevery sweet, you've got to love the range of teasers we do, from sweet to hot and creepy.
ReplyDeleteYeah I'm a sucker for romance ;-) I completely agree, the diversity is ace! xx
DeleteVery beautiful and romantic, and maybe the start of something bigger
ReplyDeleteThank you Julez. xx
DeleteWonderful! And this line:
ReplyDeleteA Seagull few into the sun’s light as we were momentarily plunged into darkness.
What an incredible way to indicate the hour!
Well done! Well done!
:-))))) thank you Molly, really appreciate the comment. xx
DeleteSo romantic and well written! I could have read on! :)
ReplyDeleteAww Thank you Leann, that's so encouraging. xx
DeleteSweet, delicate, romantic, and just perfect. Something many wish to have and dream of experiencing. Great teaser!
ReplyDelete:-)))) you are so kind, thank you very much. xx
DeleteJP, I must be the opposite of you. I am delighted to read your piece! It's very romantic and sensual. Plus, I could easily get lost into your work.
ReplyDeleteWOW, Thank you so much Ray. I am sincerely flattered. xx
DeleteAh, may we all get to cherish the memory of an encounter like that. Something so perfect comes rarely - though once in a lifetime can be enough. Thanks, J.P.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by and commenting Jake. xx
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