Hello and welcome to Thursday Tasters. this is where I get to share some of my work with you. This week I have decided to share something from my latest release, Behind The Makeup.
This scene is taken from the first chapter. To fill you in a bit, the police had been called to a house where a burglary was in place. As they arrived they saw the suspects take off in a red Corsa and chased them at high speed.
The sounds of horns and tires screeching were enough to
chill any warm-blooded animal.
Both Smith
and Newman had no option but to watch and report back to control, as the red
car floored it through the red lights. Cars traveling from the left swerved to
avoid the Corsa. Amazingly, the red car made it through the junction without
getting hit. None of the other cars had collided with each other. But it wasn’t
over. Newman increased his speed to follow the red car once more as he
meandered his way through the now stationary cars on the junction.
“He’s
lost it,” Newman said as they watched the red car veer left and right as the
driver fought to control the car. The driver pulled the car off to the left
much too quickly, causing the Corsa to skid sideways across three lanes of
traffic, up onto the bank and wrap itself around a tree.
“Control,
we have an RTC on North Circular Road Southbound just after A40 junction,”
Smith said as he spoke into his radio. He hopped out of the car just before
Newman had brought it to a complete stop.
Newman
pulled the hand break up with such force, you could hear the gear mechanism
grind together and then jumped out of the car to follow Smith.
Smith
reached the back of the red car and could hear soft moans from the back
passenger side. As he opened the door, a young man was slouched across the back
seat, his head was oozing a crimson river and he wasn’t conscious. Smith felt
for a pulse, it was faint.
Newman
was busy assessing the front passenger so he made his way to the driver.
The
front of the red Corsa was crumpled, steam from what he presumed to be the
radiator rose into the night sky. Smoke from the air bags joined the steam as
they danced their vapour in the street light rays. The driver hung half out of
the windscreen, his head at an awkward angle. Smith reached for a pulse,
already knowing there wouldn’t be one.
“Control,
this is Quebec Delta four nine two. We have one unconscious male with a head
injury,” He looked over to Newman for the condition of the front passenger.
Newman just shook his head.
“And
two fatalities.”
Hope you like enjoyed my tease today.
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Jessica
Great description. It both sets the mood and builds interest.
ReplyDeleteThank you Angelica xx
DeleteExciting! A story I just have t need to read in it's entirety. Great taster!
ReplyDeleteThank you Naomi, I really appreciate the comment xx
DeleteThat's one burglary turned bad.
ReplyDeleteIt really was Linda! And sadly things have to get worse before they get better... ;-)
DeleteYour accurate descriptions created a rapid pace of excitement. II could barely take a breath between sentences, needing to know how the chase would end.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Pablo. I really appreciate your lovely comment xx
DeleteI truly enjoyed I would love to read more
ReplyDelete;-) Thank you Mangus for stopping by and commenting xxx
DeleteExciting snippet, action packed.
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate you stopping by and commenting Gemma, thank you xx
DeleteThis was exceptional. An exciting accompaniment to your return to the group! wonderful excerpt. Just wonderful...and very breathtaking. xo
ReplyDelete*takes a bow* Thank you so much Muffy, so glad you enjoyed it xxx
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