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Friday, 4 October 2013

Flash Fiction Frida - A kiss

Welcome back to Flash Fiction Friday.

Like before I am given a picture and I have to write a little something in just 100 words. I have hit the word count right on the mark (second time this week), so I am over the moon. It is a bit harder than it looks. Anyway, this is the picture:


 
 
Yeah I was a bit lot for inspiration on this one too, but this is what I came up with. I hope you like it.


I love people watching and the park is one of the best places to go for this. Parents playing with their children, old couples holding hands, lovers steeling a moment. That’s when I spotted this odd couple. A well dressed woman in a white mini dress. Her hair was dark and short and she looked like money. The guy next to her was much rougher looking. Worn jeans and a tank top. His hair dark with grease and slicked back behind his ears. He said something and then they kissed. Her tongue on show as she offered it to him.
 
Please leave a comment, I love hearing your views.  Don't forget to stop by all the other authors participating this week, just follow the link:
 
http://flasherfictionfriday.blogspot.co.uk/2013/10/4-october-2013.html?spref=fb
 
That's it for this weeks FFF, I'll be back on Sunday with my Sexy Snippets, but until then, take care.
 
J.P. Stevens
xXx
 
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13 comments:

  1. Muffy Wilson4 October 2013 at 08:01

    Oh, yes...."Her tongue on show..." as if she knew someone was watching. I love that line, JP, as if she knew someone was watching. Sexy flash!:) xo

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    1. J.P. Stevens5 October 2013 at 21:34

      lol Thanks Muffy, so glad you stopped by. xx

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  2. Unknown4 October 2013 at 12:17

    Great people watching. You described the action with vivid deatils.

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  3. S.J. Maylee4 October 2013 at 16:11

    Oh. You totally left me wanting more on these two. Very cool.

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  4. Unknown4 October 2013 at 23:02

    great job. I like that they are being watched and don't know

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    1. J.P. Stevens5 October 2013 at 21:37

      Thanks for stopping by again Michelle. Glad you liked it. xx

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  5. Anonymous5 October 2013 at 00:11

    I adore people watching! Great flash, J.P.

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    1. J.P. Stevens5 October 2013 at 21:38

      Thanks Doris, it is a great hobby. Lots of inspiration at times ;-) xx

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  6. Julian Spong5 October 2013 at 12:22

    Great flash and these two are definitely a couple worth watching more

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  7. Rolling Muse in The Roses7 October 2013 at 02:01

    Sweet flash and romantic. I loved this and I wouldn't be able to stop watching these too. I sense a story emerging from this piece. :)

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