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Friday, 13 September 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - The One

Welcome back to Flash Fiction Friday, and yes I have another super picture to tease you with.  Same rules as last week, only 100 words.  I won't make you wait any longer, so here it is.




Matt was still in mid swing to face the door, when she walked in. It was her hair that caught his attention first. The colour of fire trailing down her back. Her milky skin and green eyes were enough to capture his attention, and then she smiled. Cute dimples captivated him in a heartbeat.

Matt leaned back on his chair and adjusted himself slightly, before resting his elbow on the arm of the chair, and slowly put a finger to his temple to study her. He let his eyes travel down her body.

‘Oh yes,’ he thought, ‘you will more than do!’


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Thats all for this weeks flash, so until next week, take care.

J.P.Stevens
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22 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 September 2013 at 11:36

    Oh, nice. What will she do for, I wonder? ;-)

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    1. J.P. Stevens13 September 2013 at 12:03

      lol Doris, I couldn't possibly say...Well not just yet. xx

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  2. gemma parkes13 September 2013 at 11:39

    I can see him thinking all of this! Very fitting flash.

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    1. J.P. Stevens13 September 2013 at 12:04

      Thank you so much Gemma. xxx

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    2. Naomi Shaw13 September 2013 at 12:11

      Excellent. But when and what will she do??

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    3. J.P. Stevens13 September 2013 at 12:37

      I thought I would leave that up the readers imagination. I was thinking she would do for him. xx

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  3. ER Pierce13 September 2013 at 13:43

    Intriguing. I'm curious, so well done. Is he a pimp? Is he going to capture her and run away to his castle? Is he a werewolf or vampire and her essence sings to him?

    Nice.

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    1. J.P. Stevens13 September 2013 at 19:42

      hahaha I love where your mind is going ER Pierce. I think I will let you decide. xx

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  4. Muffy Wilson13 September 2013 at 17:14

    And now another cliffhanger! Well, executed JP, well done!! Wonder what he is up to, but I think his having to "adjust himself" is a clue! Loved it!!:) xo

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    1. J.P. Stevens13 September 2013 at 19:44

      Thank you very much Muffy. She has definitely met his demands in more ways than one ;-)

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  5. Leann Mitchell13 September 2013 at 17:42

    Oh, I'd love to find out what he does with her! Nice! :)

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    1. J.P. Stevens13 September 2013 at 19:45

      Thank you so much leann. I promise, if I ever take it further, I will let you know on here. xx

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  6. Unknown14 September 2013 at 01:04

    sexy. I want to know more

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  7. Kiru Taye14 September 2013 at 06:51

    This could go anyway and I love the suspense. Nicely done, JP.

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    1. J.P. Stevens15 September 2013 at 18:06

      Thank you Kiru, I'm glad you loved the suspense. xxx

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  8. Julian Spong14 September 2013 at 19:16

    What will she do for? More please, great flash

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    1. J.P. Stevens15 September 2013 at 18:07

      lol glad it had the effect I wanted. Thank you Julez. xx

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  9. Rolling Muse in The Roses15 September 2013 at 05:08

    Oh my oh my! I love this. I can only imagine his naughty grin as he gazes up and down her. Will she fill the role? hmmm... ;-) great flash!!

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    1. J.P. Stevens15 September 2013 at 18:08

      Oh well, she kind of has to. But not without making him work for her of course ;-). Thank you xx

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  10. Unknown15 September 2013 at 12:19

    I want to know what he has planned with this woman. Your flash is a perfect take on the picture provided. I was completely living your character.

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