Hello and welcome back to Thursday Tasters. this is where we showcase a piece of work from either a published piece, or a Work In progress aka WIP. No more than 400 words.
This week I wanted you to meet Di. She is the heroine in my current WIP Day Off. I have completely fallen in love with her, and I hope you will too.
“Oh for god sake,” Dianne muttered under her breath. In her
rush to get out the front door, the wind had blown a gust up her skirt trapping
it as she shut the front door. Its entanglement only noticed at the sound of
the material ripping as she went to walk away. “This is all I flaming well
need.”
Di turned back to face her front door and insert the key
into the lock. Her skirt was free but the damage was irreparable. She closed
the door behind her and pulled up her sleeve to reveal the dial on her watch.
Late was an understatement. Not wanting to waist any more time, Di started to
unzip her skirt as she walked down the hallway of her flat, heals thudding
against the wooden floor, as she made her way to her bedroom. Her skirt slid
down her thighs, revealing her long slender legs and almost tripped her up as
she walked far too quickly as the skirt reached her ankle. Di reached out and
grabbed the door frame with each hand to save herself from falling arse over
tit. She took a moment to take a few long, slow, steady breaths. “What the hell
am I gonna wear now?”
Di kicked off her skirt and one of her high heels went
flying off with it, straight into her full length mirror. She scrunched her
eyes shut at the sound of the glass shattering into a thousand pieces. Di exhaled deeply and rested her forehead on
the doorframe. “For fuck sake!” The frustration bubbled through her veins with
an uncontrollable heat.
Screw work, he doesn’t
give a shit about you anyway. Di knew this was her irrational side talking.
She couldn’t possible take a day off work. Or
can I? “Fuck it,” Di said aloud as she walked down the hall to her handbag
and grabbed her mobile phone. His number was the last one she had dialled. She
noticed that he was the only one in her call list apart from her mother. The
frustration was fast becoming anger. More aimed at herself if she was honest.
She had let her work consume her life. Not anymore.
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Until next time, take care
Jessica xxx
So nice to have you back and read your easy style again. Yes, I think we will all love Di, as we can ALL identify with her. One of those days is and understatement!! Life can be a bitch but this is a delicious excerpt. This is sooooooo every woman! <3 xo
ReplyDeleteThanks Muffy xx
DeleteShe is miffed! Great depiction of emotion.
ReplyDeleteThanks Angelica xx
DeletePoor Di sounds really exasperated. I can see why you love her, she's a wonderful character. Great taster
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ReplyDeleteGood for her making a stand and, hopefully, taking some time out. This snippet pulled me right in.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gemma
Delete7 years of bad luck, outch! I agree that she'd better stay home today.
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